A dispute developed last Thursday between the Anoka County sheriff and county commissioners. Sheriff Gus Dicesari accused county commissioners of “putting the lives of the people of this county in jeopardy” for cutting some of Dicesari’s department’s budget in order to save money.
Commission President Anne Chenn said that the county does not have enough money to spend so much money in his department. Specifically, the money she does not want provided would fund new police cruisers and the hiring of five new sheriff’s deputies.
Several county commissioners agreed with Chenn, while others sided with Dicesari. The total vote by the end of the meeting was 5-2 against Dicesari’s request for additional funds for his department.
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ReplyDeleteI agree with much of what Rachel said. I noticed that the name was misspelled. It should be DiCesari, or atleast thats what is listed in the majority of the story. Overall, very good job!
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